P-Balla's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let's Do This ft. Monk & Icon]

Yeah man..

This ain't bad for a mainstream type song. I thought you were underground though... All that aside, I think this track is alright. The idea is pretty cool. But to be honest, I thought it was pretty bootleg, no offense... it was sorta hard to take seriously, especially in the hook. This type of track suits Icon's style although it wasn't an exceptional verse. Trying to make a Harry Potter referenced simile sound hard just doesn't work. Monk doesn't really fit in this track in my opinion, its not his style and you can hear it in the recording. He's much sicker on other songs.

Keep doing your thing though man, you're progressing and getting better.

- P.

Jirohbomb responds:

I am underground, but I like experimenting. As for the hook... yeah I am not the best singer so yeah... Originally Icon and Monk weren't gonna be on the track, but Monk asked to be on it, then Icon asked to be on it. Thanks for the review man.

[NGRBC R2 - Jirohbomb]

Haha

Too easy Spawn. It doesn't matter what this guy submits, you already got this. Good luck for the rest of the contest!

- P.

[Bustology]

Ill beat

Shits ill man good work.

And to DJ Ses (theeyeofmusik): You don't start no movements kid, nobody respects your wack ass so take that Sideshow Bob-ass afro the fuck outta here muhfucka.

Keep up the good work 7000!

- P.

[battle rapper dude guy]

Well?

I was actually doeen somesing call schooool, I was doeen all dese teeengs.

lol I just thought your outro sounded funny as hell.

This was aiite though bruh stay up.

- P.

p.s. make sure you take our advice and smoke some weed.

[[E7]Mandate of Seven(prod. HW)]

Sick bars

And nice diss in the second verse.

- P.

GloineFiodh responds:

good looks P. thanks man

[Push - Dureagon]

holy tits

man, with better mixing and mastering you could be the next 9th Wonder!

- P.

DJDureagon responds:

Hey thanks thats a really nice compliment. 9th is the man i dont think im that good.
I am actually in the process of mastering all of my songs thus far as they are too inconsistant.

[Cthulhu the Cynic Vs. Iconic]

You killed Icon

again. But man, make sure you work on your mic presence for the further rounds, because that will come back to bite you. You got all the rhymes, now you just need to sound hot on the mic. And all you need to do to be on that level is not change your voice or nothing, just raise your voice, put in more expression, make yourself stand out.

- P.

GloineFiodh responds:

yeah man i hear you. i concentrate on articulation the most, to make sure listeners can understand what i'm saying, but even now that i listen theres definitely room for improvement on mic presence. thanks dude

[FF | Pleasant Journey]

I like this one man

Not too much I can say, its chill, I love the vibe... you've heard my feedback before so you get the idea haha.

As for the question you asked me in your last response about how I'm going with recording track, I've been real slack lately with music man. Sorry about that. I've been real busy with a whole bunch of complications at school. I've been trying to work out how I can free up time to make music and I've decided to make some lifestyle changes. So it won't be too long man!

- P.

freddyfinger responds:

it's cool, gotta do what you gotta do. thanks for reviewing